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Offline Rocket Rabbit

Nocturne
« on: September 14, 2009, 12:30:16 AM »
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    “Six crew and only one bathroom?
    You’re lucky there’s not been a mutiny.”


    A tale of gunfights, space flight and the search for freedom.



    ‘We broke the Earth. I guess that’s the simplest way to put it. After everything she did for us – giving us life, cradling us even as we outgrew her – she just couldn’t support us anymore. We broke her.

    So there was an exodus. Folk what can pay always fly first, and it was no different back then. The rest – well, they did what they could. Either way, they all took to the sky, trying to escape their mistakes.

    For over a hundred years, mankind was just drifting through space.

    Eventually, we found ourselves a new solar system, fulla planets that could easily be adapted for our use. Lots of new Earths. Enough space for everyone. Of course, some things never change.

    Some of the Earths were more like old Earth than others. They thought themselves better. Maybe they were. They sure had all the things that make a civilisation; technology, art, medicine.

    Greed.

    See, there was one rock, Vali that caught their eye. Just one insignificant, out-of-the-way moon, tucked away amongst the Outer planets.  Nothing much special to look at, but it turned out she was worth her weight in gold to the Inner planets.

    Pretty predictable, I guess, how things went after that.

    War. You pick your side. If you got any kind of moral, you stick with it.

    Of course, there are those sumbitches who like to play at swapping sides. Changing their uniforms, selling out those what fought alongside them. Then again, they’re not nearly as bad as them that don’t change their colours before betraying their own. When your enemy looks like you, how’re you supposed to know who to fight?

    I’ve been stabbed in the back more times’n I care to tell.

    Folks like me, we’re looking to forget.’


       Captain Aiden Fenway, Nocturne



    Chapters

    Story Arc 1: From Burnup to Eremiah
    Chapter 1: Hangover
    Chapter 2: Sale
    Chapter 3: Dirt
    Chapter 4: Criminal
    Chapter 5: Vegetable
    Chapter 6: Trip-Wire
    Chapter 7: Bounce

    Coming soon:
    Part 8: Eremiah(in two parts)
    Part 9: Crucial(in two parts)



    WARNING
    for those with sensitive ears eyes
    muchos bad language, filth, degradation.
    At some point, a bit of excessive violence for good measure.
    Just a heads up!
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    Kind of accidentally deleted the original thread. I had momentary melting of my mind. There was drool, I swear. I wish I hadn't done it now, very annoysome, but I will restore everything, for the benefit of anyone who was actually interested in this project to start with. :)
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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #31 on: October 11, 2009, 05:11:08 PM »
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  • Okay, who wants a new chapter? Let's see some hands up!


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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #32 on: October 11, 2009, 11:49:09 PM »
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  • Hey!  Me!  

    ~tries to find a 'hands up' smiley~

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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #33 on: October 12, 2009, 12:16:39 AM »
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  • Saint spotted a facepalm... waitasecond, no, he spotted a tiny skeleton.

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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #34 on: October 12, 2009, 05:23:58 AM »
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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #35 on: October 13, 2009, 08:30:58 PM »
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  • This is Burningplain calling Rocket Rabbit
    This is Burningplain calling Rocket Rabbit
    A new chapter would be awesome. The way your writing just flows. It's awesome I like it, I like it a lot. *tries for a thumbs up emoticon and mutters darkly when it doesn't work * :thumbs: :thumbsup:
    If there's more to come please get it up quick.

    [mod]Sorry it's a little late, but I added your thumbs up, bp.[/mod]

    Offline Rocket Rabbit

    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #36 on: October 13, 2009, 08:53:04 PM »
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    Ohh thanks BP. Will try and have it up before the end of the week! 

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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #37 on: October 14, 2009, 06:27:56 PM »
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  • *Runs around shouting "WOOT!" *

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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #38 on: October 14, 2009, 11:04:16 PM »
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  • Will hopefully be able to get home early tomorrow and finish the next part, since my afternoon lecture is cancelled.  :panic:/ :fist:

    But sleepy now. :( Much busy-ness going on today. :P
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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #39 on: October 15, 2009, 02:08:52 AM »
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  • I await the newepisode with anticipation Robbit.  Even more so as it comes at the expense of your education!  lol

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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #40 on: October 15, 2009, 02:14:39 AM »
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  • A third tiny witch, NicTei has spotted!

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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #41 on: October 15, 2009, 03:45:57 AM »
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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #42 on: November 07, 2009, 06:27:18 PM »
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  • Hey Rabbit just wodering when that next chapter is going to be up. The wait is driving me up the wall because you book is awesome!

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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #43 on: November 07, 2009, 09:24:31 PM »
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  • Uhh... well, I've just written another 750 words of part 7, which is turning out to be longer than I expected. I think there will end up being 9 parts.

    ...

    Yeah, you can have a chapter BP, cos I like the idea of having a fan!  :blush:

    Here you go, chaps and chappettes.

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    Nocturne - 1:7
    « Reply #44 on: November 07, 2009, 09:31:17 PM »
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  • Episode 1, Part 7
    Bounce



    Fen stroked his chin and frowned at the monitor. Eremiah was just hours away and they hadn’t encountered any other traffic during the entire journey from Burnup. Now the scanners had picked up another ship, lagging some way behind them, apparently on the same course.

    Chelle occupied the co-pilot’s chair, her attention focussed on massaging her hands with a rose-pink cream. Fen thought she seemed to be back to her normal self after the spat with Doc the other night, and as he watched her, she looked over at him and smiled.

    “What’s up, sir?”

    Fen sighed. “Ship on the scanners. It’s probably nothing, but…” He trailed off. It made him uncomfortable, and he couldn’t understand why.

    Chelle nodded. “I’ll run a bounce on it.” She rubbed her hands on her denim skirt, turned to her keyboard and began typing. Fen knew what she was doing. Each registered ship had a unique IST signal code that contained the make and model number, registered owner, captain and crewmembers and other details. This code could be picked up by IST receivers in the nearby area. Of course, it was possible for unscrupulous captains to hack the code and change the information – a popular choice for those wishing to fly below the radar.

    “IST  72K4729347 – the Romina, crewed by…” Chelle paused, insistently tapping more keys. “No details on the crew. It’s been hacked, sir.”

    “What class?”

    Chelle recited the ship’s make and model, and Fen tried to remember the specifics on a ship like that. From what he could recall, the Romina would be a lightship, designed to make fast trips between the planets. Nocturne was travelling at a relatively leisurely speed, but the Romina should have been able to outrun her completely travelling at full speed. The other ship was lagging behind. Fen wanted to know why.

    “Open a channel to them,” he instructed Chelle, who nodded and complied. Fen adjusted himself in the seat as the monitor before him flickered into life. Blue static hovered for a second before being replaced with a view of the Romina’s cockpit.

    “This is Captain Fenway of the Nocturne. Hello?” he said into the mic. On the screen, a man lowered himself into view and grinned widely at the camera. He had the face of an angel and a nose like a piglet, framed by golden curls.

    “How can I help you, Captain?”

    “I noticed your ship trailing behind us. You having some engine trouble there?”

    A strange look swept across the captain’s face, and he glanced to his left before answering. “Uhh… yes, actually, we are. I’ve got someone dealing with it right now.”

    Fen studied the man. Something was still bothering him. “I saw you weren’t flying up to normal speed. Thought I should check you didn’t need help.”

    “Very kind of you, Captain.” The man grinned and scratched his pig nose. “Now, begging your pardon, I have things to see to.”

    The screen went dark. Fen looked over at Chelle, saw the quizzical expression on her face and raised his eyebrow. “I’m still not sure about it. Keep an eye on things, let me know if they change course at all.”

    “Yessir.”

    Fen found Reyna curled on the sofa in the common area with her nose stuck in one of her mechanics textbooks. Humbert the dog was spread at her feet, and he rolled his golden eyes as Fen approached. He sat down at the table opposite Silv, who nodded and offered to deal him into a card game.

    “Where are the others?” Fen asked, taking his cards.

    “Doc’s down in the engine room with Eggman. He’s still bummed out about the fight he had with Chelle,” Reyna said, not looking up from her reading. “I think… what’s-her-name? Rush is probably in her bunk.”

    Fen looked up at Silv. Outwardly, his friend seemed calm and relaxed, but a muscle twitched beneath his eye, betraying his frustration. Fen sighed. His crew seemed tense, especially with the arrival of Rush and Chelle’s odd behaviour, but he suspected it had been brewing for a long time. It wasn’t uncommon for crews to get like this after a few months of travel; simple cabin fever. Of everyone, Reyna seemed the least bothered. It had been a little over a year since she’d joined the crew and the novelty apparently hadn’t worn off.

    The past year had been rough – job after tedious job with very little payoff. Now though, Fen thought they deserved a break, a chance to unwind for a week or two, but he didn’t know if they would be able to afford it. He made a mental note to look over the accounts book later and double check the numbers.

    “Will we have time to see Sima and Poloro when we get there?” Reyna looked up from her textbook and adjusted her glasses. Fen saw the cards shudder in Silv’s hand, and his calm expression faltered. Sima and Poloro were Reyna’s adoptive parents; they’d raised her on Eremiah since she was a toddler. She hadn’t even known she had a brother until Silv had shown up out of the blue.

    “I expect so,” Fen said simply. He carefully placed a spread of cards on the table.

    “You win.” Silv tossed his cards down too and leaned back in his chair resignedly. Fen saw him watching his little sister. “I’ll be in my bunk if you need me.”

    Silv rose out of his chair and disappeared into the bunkroom. Reyna shuffled uncomfortably on the sofa and flipped carelessly through to the end of her textbook. Finally she glanced over at Fen and spoke.

    “We don’t have to stop at the temple.” She made a little frown. “I don’t mind if Silv -”

    Fen put his hand up to stop her. “No, you should go. Don’t worry about him.”

    She fidgeted, tucked her bare feet beneath her and wrapped her arms around herself, the picture of discomfort. After a moment, she stood up and left, heading towards the engine room. Fen sighed and reclined in his seat, stretching. He definitely needed to get these people off this boat, for a while at least.




    Rush sat in her bunk, thinking. She wasn't entirely sure what she would do once Nocturne reached Eremiah. All her plans thus far had been focussed on getting transport, in getting away from Burnup.

    She wished she knew more about Brunswick. What was he doing right now? Chances were he wouldn't just be sitting on his arse, not after coming so close to getting her. Rush had been extremely careful to cover her tracks when she reached Burnup; it had to have taken some serious skill for Brunswick to find her. Either that or someone had sold her out.

    It didn't matter though, since the end result had been the same. He'd turned up anyhow. Rush thought she was lucky to have made it out alive.

    Shaking her head, she leaned her elbows on her knees and massaged her temples. Eremiah was religious hotspot. Lots of people coming from across the system, so she should be able to blend in quite easily.

    "Chelle?" A knock at the entry, and Doc's face appeared. He smiled when he saw Rush. "Sorry. Was just... nevermind."

    Rush shrugged, but he didn't go away.

    "What's up?" he asked, drawing the curtain all the way back and leaning against the wall, his arms crossed across his chest. "You look worried."

    "Oh..." Rush frowned. "I don't know. Nothing, I guess."

    "What're you going to do when we get to Eremiah?"

    "I don't know." Not that it was any of his business.

    "I know the place quite well. Are you looking to settle down or keep moving?"

    "I don't know."

    "You don't seem the sort to settle down easily." He paused. "You look like the sort who's running away."

    Rush didn't reply. She didn't like where this was going. "Sorry, Doc, but I'm not interested in talking to you about this."

    He shrugged. "Fair enough. But if you feel like moving about more, you could always stick with us for a while longer. You might find somewhere you like."

    Rush hunched her shoulders, still waiting for him to go away. She really didn't want to stay. The last thing she needed was to get involved with more people. The trouble with people was that she couldn't control them, couldn't predict them. How long before they betrayed her?

    The captain's voice buzzed over the intercom, breaking the awkward silence, and both of them raised their heads to listen.

    "We're beginning the descent into atmo now, people. Arrival in twenty minutes."

    The message clicked off, and Doc turned back to Rush.

    "Guess you'd better pack your bags then."

    "I guess I should," she replied evenly.

    "Well, have a little think about what I said. I know this place is small, but we're a lovely bunch once you get to know us." He grinned.

    "Right." Rush waited for him to leave, but apparently he wasn't done yet.

    "One more thing."

    "Yeah?"

    "Me and Chelle are taking Reyna up to the temple once we land." He looked hopeful. "She asked if you wanted to come with?"

    "I think I'll pass. Sorry."

    "You sure? It's a beautiful place. Very spiritual." Doc chuckled and turned to walk away. "You might have an epiphany about what you want to do next."


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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #45 on: November 07, 2009, 09:37:36 PM »
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  • Also, I'd like to apologise to anyone who is following this story for my three week lapse in concentration. Real Life called and said I had to do stuff.  :dontknow:

    But since I'm nicely ahead on my NaNo writing, I'll be continuing this a little bit more every other day or so.  :clap:

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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #46 on: November 08, 2009, 12:11:14 AM »
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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #47 on: November 08, 2009, 03:34:17 PM »
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  • It is good to hhave you back. I'm enjoy this thoroughly, keep up the good work.

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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #48 on: December 08, 2009, 08:05:54 PM »
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  • :Gaah:
    Java may have failed again.
    Wondering whats happening with Nocturne, I need another chapter up please, it is enjoyable and I'm missing having a good read.
    *does puppy dog eyes.

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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #49 on: May 07, 2010, 12:04:03 AM »
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    =]

    Yeah. I fail. But I will write a new chapter, filled with much shinyness and excitingfullment.  :woot:
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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #50 on: May 24, 2010, 02:37:49 PM »
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  • As promised, a new chapter is in the works. I aim for posting later tonight, or tomorrow at the latest. If I don't, may I be struck down by lightning and beaten with pointy sticks.  >(

    Until the lightning and sticks, here are 45 words for you.

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    After spending so much time in space, to walk on the ground under a real sky was a little unsettling, Rush thought. Especially under this sky, which was such a vivid azure colour it seemed to be glowing. It hurt her eyes to look at.
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    Re: Nocturne
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    Well... the next chapter - Eremiah: part 1 - is finished.

    I could post it right now buuuuuuuuuut I don't feel like it.

    I'm going to go eat ice cream.

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    Nocturne - 1:8.1
    « Reply #52 on: May 25, 2010, 12:53:34 AM »
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  • Episode 1, Part 8
    Eremiah: Part 1


    Rush had her packed bag ready and was waiting in the hold as the ship touched down on Eremiah. The captain had said over the intercom that it was a little after dawn. Early was good, Rush thought. Less chance of attracting attention from people.

    She shifted her bag on her shoulder and dashed strands of hair from her face as she waited. One by one, the crew filtered down from various parts of the ship, ready to do whatever it is they were going to do with their leave-time.

    The captain came down the steps with a clipboard, a spring in his step. He seemed much taller when he wasn’t standing in Silv’s shadow, Rush decided. Once upon a time, he might have been her type. Once upon a very different time, hooking up with a captain like Fenway would have pissed off all the right kinds of people.

    "Right you lot," Captain Fenway said loudly, as the blast doors inched open, letting in a wave of sweet, fresh air. "Get the hell out of here so I can get paid." He motioned for Silv to start unloading.

    "Wait, captain," Chelle said. She swallowed and gave Rush a meaningful look. "She’s got stuff in the lockup.”

    The captain looked confused for a moment before realisation dawned on his face and he grinned widely. "Of course! Your Centralian piece. How could I forget?"

    He produced the key from his pocket, unlocked the metal box and took out Rush's gun. He made no move to hand it to her, but he lifted it closely to his face to examine. Rush felt her cheeks become heated, but there was no way he could recognise the engraving. Was there?

    "Well... you were right, Silv." He glared at Rush. "Interesting indeed."

    Relieved but confused, Rush glanced from Fenway to the Silv. "What are you talking about?"

    “Oh, nothing really.” Fen grinned sharkishly and handed her the gun, followed by the holster and ammo. “Nice having you aboard, Miss Rush.”

    Rush glared at him for a moment, trying to read his expression. His mouth curved slightly at the edges – the hint of a smile – and the amused look in his eyes infuriated her.

    “Yeah. Thanks,” she answered flatly. They were all staring at her – when she met Doc’s eyes he actually winked at her – so she gave them a brisk nod and hefted her bag onto her shoulder. She was sure she wouldn’t miss them. She didn’t look back as she descended the walkway.

    After spending so much time in space, to walk on the ground under a real sky was a little unsettling, Rush thought. Especially under this sky, which was such a vivid azure colour it seemed to be glowing. It hurt her eyes to look at.

    Juriu was more pleasant than she expected. She already knew about the planet – a hotbed for all the different religions – but Juriu was its heart. Every aspect of the world was concentrated in this one city, but it still retained its spiritual roots. Rush had been expecting sky-scraper towers and high-speed living – that was the kind of city she was used to, but Juriu couldn’t be more different.

    Juriu seemed to channel a much more ancient sense of the word ‘city’, like the old-Earth civilisations that once built their cities as places for spiritual reverence. All the buildings here were of mud construct, but in no way primitive. Rearing up some distance from the docks was an elaborate castle, with delicate spires and decorations, the same dusty brown colour as the smaller buildings around it.

    And blue. The colour was everywhere in every subtly different shade imaginable. Banners and flags adorned the rough surfaces of the marketplace she soon found herself in. It was the colour of choice for the traders, haggling and shouting all around her.

    A sharp smell like burnt oranges came from a food stall nearby. Rush gagged. Plates on the stall held reddish creatures like large maggots; several more were sizzling on the grill. The teenage girl tending the stall wore acolytes’ robes, but her belly swelled beneath them. Rush could guess her story but didn’t envy it. She stared coldly at the girl before turning away.

    Dressed in dark or earthy colours, outsiders stood out amidst all the blue the locals and pilgrims wore. Rush herself was dressed in black and grey. She ran her fingers through her hair and wandered through the market, doing her best to look at ease.

    She soon became aware that someone was following her. As she passed by the stalls selling souvenirs and trinkets, she kept catching sight of the same woman.

    She was tall and angular, with a wide face and wild blonde hair and she wore a red tunic with some insignia on it that Rush couldn't make out properly. She was definitely following her though. Rush was sure of this.

    As Rush approached a stall, smiling and striking up a light conversation with the old couple working there, she watched the woman. The stall was covered with small mirrors and polished metal and Rush bent close to a brass kettle, pretending to examine it. She could see the woman reflected in it.

    The woman lingered beside a clothes stall, fingering velvet robes with disinterest and every few seconds, she would glance up and around. Her gaze kept returning to Rush.

    Rush straightened up and nodded to the couple. She'd told them she was just another tourist, come to visit Juriu for the first time, taking it all in. As she walked away, the woman following her studied a garish little hat like it was a rich tapestry.

    Forcing herself to walk casually, instead of running like she so desperately wanted to, Rush cut between two stalls and found herself at the edge of the market. Hard-packed mud walls reared in front of her with a narrow walkway in either direction. She went left until she found an alleyway that opened up between the buildings and ducked into it. Here she waited, unsure what to do next.

    She could wait for the woman. If she was being followed, it would be easy to confront her, find out why. Had Brunswick sniffed her out again or had somebody else gotten wind of the numbers on her head? Or she could escape. But she wasn't sure if that's what she wanted. The thought that somebody knew her, was trying to find her, would torment her until she knew the truth.

    As it turned out, Rush didn't have to wait that long. As she stood, the sweat on her skin turning icy cold in the shade, the blonde woman passed by the end of the alleyway. Rush froze, pressed against the wall. It wasn't her imagination then. This woman was stalking her, and she had to know why.

    Coming to a decision, Rush followed the alley away from the marketplace, finding herself in a small square bordered on all sides by tall, crooked mud-houses. A rough wooden well occupied the space in the centre, surrounded by benches.

    Rush darted to the left, flattened herself against the wall again and waited. She strained her ears for the sound of the blonde woman's footsteps on the baked-dirt path. Around her, she could hear the distant voices of the people living nearby and the sound of bells from the temples dotted across the city. But no footsteps.

    Rush looked around the corner. There was no sign of the woman. In fact, nobody passed by the far end of the alleyway. She breathed out, tried to relax and think.

    "Neroli."

    She almost threw up.

    From behind her, a soft chuckle and the sound of a boot scraping on the ground. Rush didn't turn but her hand darted to the gun at her hip. Her heart rose up in her throat - or was it bile - she had no way of telling because her head was just spinning so hard.

    Fragmented thoughts flooded through her head, struck through with blinding fear. The impulse to run battled with the impulse to turn around and shoot him in the head. She couldn't move.

    He had found her.



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    Re: Nocturne
    « Reply #53 on: May 25, 2010, 01:27:50 AM »
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  • Wow!  Long time since a chapter of this was posted.  I couldn't remember what story it was at first!

    Anyway, nicely done Robbit. Glad to see this space opera singing again.  :thumbs:
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      April 24, 2012, 01:12:31 PM
    • Chinaren: Memoirs of Theodore Chance is finally polling! Get yer votes in before it's too late!
      April 23, 2012, 10:53:14 AM
    • araell: Another chapter is up over at Writing on the Wall and things are starting to get wierd :o
      April 18, 2012, 12:28:29 PM
    • Saint: Didn;t expect this, but I've actually reached a promised deadline, Shadows 29 is up, with answers to some questions, but not necessarily the ones you want.
      April 17, 2012, 01:02:48 PM
    • Saint: RL's fighting me prtty damn hard at the moment, but I'm faighting back as hard as I can.  Hopefully, new Shadows and Meek will be up today.  If you're really lucky, I could even have the first part of ThickAir.
      April 17, 2012, 11:19:39 AM
    • NicTei: Oh, um...new chapter of Another Zombie Apocalypse!  Link on the sidebar ('cause I'm too lazy to go and link it here).
      April 16, 2012, 08:33:51 PM
    • Elsza: Yes, finally a new chapter of Half in Love, apologies for the wait!! :)
      April 16, 2012, 07:50:00 PM
    • Chinaren: color fail
      April 13, 2012, 02:11:38 PM
    • Chinaren: [color=purpl;e]new ep of Chance up biatches![/color]
      April 13, 2012, 02:11:29 PM
    • Angel: A short one for Lumen is up. :)
      April 12, 2012, 09:54:40 PM
    • Angel: Oh gosh! A new chapter of The Silver Raven?! Are your eyes deceiving you? Nope! Go read!!
      April 11, 2012, 10:12:08 PM
    • Chinaren: Amazing! A new chapter of The Third Power is now up and ready for your suggestions!
      April 11, 2012, 09:41:51 AM
    • Chinaren: Put the Three Word Story (so far) together.  Wow. Strange.  Very strange.  But also funny.
      April 11, 2012, 08:00:17 AM
    • araell: Truth is in need of your help so head n over there and offer your assistance. It would be greatly appreciated :/ x
      April 10, 2012, 03:21:48 PM
    • araell: A poll has been placed on Writing on the Wall so vote away :D xx
      April 09, 2012, 01:13:26 PM
    • Angel: Bonjour!! It is incredibly possible i could have something new!! OMG i know!
      April 08, 2012, 12:17:54 PM
    • Chinaren: Wow.  I spot an Angel! :waves:
      April 07, 2012, 11:58:53 PM
    • Overlord: Chapters are working again!  Recent Chapters block should be back soon.
      April 07, 2012, 11:29:07 AM



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